Tuesday 16 August 2011
Oral Language: WALT explain & present
i think i did well at staying on the same topic and i
need to work to the speed and plan before i stay
record on the computer
What happens when you are asleep?
What make this a good explanation
*It Has Good detail of when you are asleep
it is good for all ages to read
it is good struture and it is easy to read
it is easy to understand
23 September 2011: Literacy - WritingWALT explain
Here is our success criteria...
Here is my end of term writing sample... Click here for a full PDF version of my writing with teacher comments...
3 October 2011: For Inquiry this term we were working on completing our independent inquiries for "The World's in Our Hands." Here are my reflections on my learning.
Oral Language: WALT explain & present
i think i did well at staying on the same topic and i
need to work to the speed and plan before i stay
record on the computer
What happens when you are asleep?
What make this a good explanation
*It Has Good detail of when you are asleep
23 September 2011: Literacy - WritingWALT explain
Here is our success criteria...
Click here for a full PDF version of my writing with teacher comments...
Here is a summary of my writing progress this term...
Click here for my full writing progress indicator matrix...
3 October 2011: For Inquiry this term we were working on completing our independent inquiries for "The World's in Our Hands." Here are my reflections on my learning.
You can all see my completed movie at:http://wsroom152011-2.wikispaces.com/The+World%27s+in+our+Hands
3 October 2011